Day 7 – My favorite poem

14 06 2010

This is my favorite poem that I have written.

Fortress
By Toothpic

I cant believe this
You deceived me
Told me a lie
That i believed

How could i be so stupid
How could i have tbought
It was all okay
Cos it wasnt

Im sorry for the way
This turned out
I was just trying to help
But you didnt want it

You are hiding it
All inside
To keep it safe
From me

I want to dig it out
But the walls on
Your heart are tall
And sharp

The closer i get the more it hurts

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14 06 2010
slpmartin

Quite a fine poem …thanks for sharing it.

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